Postcard drafts

By , July 21, 2010 10:31 am

Heya! I’ve attached two drafts for the front of my postcard (as well to use as a poster). I’d love thoughts. I feel like the draft 2 is a bit too busy, but I do want to find a way to include one of my (awesome) press quotes. Please let me know what you think!

uncovering mirrors postcard draft 1

Uncovering the Mirrors, draft 1

uncovering mirrors postcard draft 2

Uncovering the Mirrors, draft 2

5 Responses to “Postcard drafts”

  1. Silvas says:

    I don’t think the second one is too busy (and that’s a great quote!). To me, the first one looks a little unbalanced, even. That’s my personal opinion, of course.

    I might go for the second one just because the dates are a little bigger (more in your face) and easier to read, though for the poster it won’t make much difference.

  2. M says:

    Where is this hand with the grocery bag coming from? Is this your hand somehow strangely twisted around your body? Sadly, I am unable to get over the strangeness of the hands.

    I do like having the quote though.

    • Rebecca says:

      Your face is strangely twisted! (I’m allowed to make fun of M because we know each other from high school…)

      More seriously, the hand on my knee is my left hand, holding my legs. The hand holding the bag is my right hand, just resting on the stairs. No twisting, just a lot of fabric.

  3. RadDyke says:

    The second one!

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